EXT- ABBEY STREET- Night
LUCY
Come on we’re here BROGAN
BROGAN
Woop woop! Let’s go!
INT- AMO- Night
LUCY
BROGAN that creepy old dude is looking at you.
BROGAN that creepy old dude is looking at you.
BROGAN
Yes! I’ve been wanting to dance with him all night!
LUCY
Ew!
BROGAN
Bye!
BROGAN walks off to man and LUCY watches very closely and suspiciously. The man takes BROGAN by the arm and starts to lead her out of the club.
MAN
I’ll take you home now.
BROGAN
I don’t want to go home!
MAN
Tough. You’re going home, and you’re going to invite me in to stay the night.
Lucy follows in the taxi behind.
BROGAN
If you turn left here my house is right on the corner.
Man ignores her.
BROGAN
Excuse me!? I told you to turn there.
MAN
We ain’t going home yet. We are going somewhere a little quieter.
Man takes her to an alley way.
LUCY jumps out of the taxi behind.
LUCY
Excuse me!? What do you think you’re doing!? Move from her before throw you in front of a bus!
Excuse me!? What do you think you’re doing!? Move from her before throw you in front of a bus!
BROGAN
LUCY, I should have listened to you! I’m sorry. If you wouldn’t have came, he could have done anything!
MAN takes out his gun and points it at LUCY’S face.
MAN
Fine I’ll kill you both then!
LUCY kicks the gun out of his hand.
BROGAN calls her dad, to get away and to get home safely. DAD throws him in the bin, so no-one knows he’s there.
EXT- ABBEY STREET- Night
LUCY
Come on we’re here BROGAN
BROGAN
Woop woop! Let’s go!
INT- AMO- Night
LUCY
BROGAN that creepy old dude is looking at you.
BROGAN that creepy old dude is looking at you.
BROGAN
Yes! I’ve been wanting to dance with him all night!
LUCY
Ew!
BROGAN
Bye!
BROGAN walks off to man and LUCY watches very closely and suspiciously. The man takes BROGAN by the arm and starts to lead her out of the club.
MAN
I’ll take you home now.
BROGAN
I don’t want to go home!
MAN
Tough. You’re going home, and you’re going to invite me in to stay the night.
Lucy follows in the taxi behind.
BROGAN
If you turn left here my house is right on the corner.
Man ignores her.
BROGAN
Excuse me!? I told you to turn there.
MAN
We ain’t going home yet. We are going somewhere a little quieter.
Man takes her to an alley way.
LUCY jumps out of the taxi behind.
LUCY
Excuse me!? What do you think you’re doing!? Move from her before throw you in front of a bus!
Excuse me!? What do you think you’re doing!? Move from her before throw you in front of a bus!
BROGAN
LUCY, I should have listened to you! I’m sorry. If you wouldn’t have came, he could have done anything!
MAN takes out his gun and points it at LUCY’S face.
MAN
Fine I’ll kill you both then!
LUCY kicks the gun out of his hand.
BROGAN calls her dad, to get away and to get home safely. DAD throws him in the bin, so no-one knows he’s there.
EXT- ABBEY STREET- Night
LUCY
Come on we’re here BROGAN
BROGAN
Woop woop! Let’s go!
INT- AMO- Night
LUCY
BROGAN that creepy old dude is looking at you.
BROGAN that creepy old dude is looking at you.
BROGAN
Yes! I’ve been wanting to dance with him all night!
LUCY
Ew!
BROGAN
Bye!
BROGAN walks off to man and LUCY watches very closely and suspiciously. The man takes BROGAN by the arm and starts to lead her out of the club.
MAN
I’ll take you home now.
BROGAN
I don’t want to go home!
MAN
Tough. You’re going home, and you’re going to invite me in to stay the night.
Lucy follows in the taxi behind.
BROGAN
If you turn left here my house is right on the corner.
Man ignores her.
BROGAN
Excuse me!? I told you to turn there.
MAN
We ain’t going home yet. We are going somewhere a little quieter.
Man takes her to an alley way.
LUCY jumps out of the taxi behind.
LUCY
Excuse me!? What do you think you’re doing!? Move from her before throw you in front of a bus!
Excuse me!? What do you think you’re doing!? Move from her before throw you in front of a bus!
BROGAN
LUCY, I should have listened to you! I’m sorry. If you wouldn’t have came, he could have done anything!
MAN takes out his gun and points it at LUCY’S face.
MAN
Fine I’ll kill you both then!
LUCY kicks the gun out of his hand.
BROGAN calls her dad, to get away and to get home safely. DAD throws him in the bin, so no-one knows he’s there.
Lucy
ReplyDeleteGreat script. You have used the correct formatting. You have used the right indents to show the difference between the action and the dialogue. All character names have been written in capitals and there are directions for the characters in brackets.
Your slug lines are correct - showing where and when the action occurs.
Do you think you could do anything to make this better?
Distinction
Mr Monahan