Fabulouswork! You have created an effective print advert that will clearly appeal to your target audience. The work is creative and effective, however it is very similar to Molly’s as the two of you developed the ideas together. How could you edit your version of the advert so that it looks separate and distinct from Molly’s? Distinction skills but Merit overall for having the same work. From Miss Morris
Fabulouswork! You have created an effective print advert that will clearly appeal to your target audience.
ReplyDeleteThe work is creative and effective, however it is very similar to Molly’s as the two of you developed the ideas together. How could you edit your version of the advert so that it looks separate and distinct from Molly’s?
Distinction skills but Merit overall for having the same work.
From Miss Morris
Dear Miss Morris,
ReplyDeleteTo improve my work i edited anything that looked similar to Molly's work, now it looks different...