Wednesday 10 October 2012

Treatment Draft 1
 
Act 1:

It’s the first day of and Bobbi is new to Bermondsey academy. Miss Morris gets a girl called Amie to show Bobbi around the school and how the things work there. Amie and Bobbi bond really well and decide to have lunch together when all of the sudden Bobbi starts rubbing her belly, not noticing what she’s doing when Amie asks her if she’s pregnant as a joke but Bobbi doesn’t laugh and Amie realises that she really is and she promises to keep this a secret. However a boy that goes to the school over hears this and tells his girlfriend Kelly that goes to the same class as Bobbi and she wants to stir things up.

Act 2:

Bobbi and Amie are sitting outside on a bench talking about their summer when all of a sudden Kelly mentions Bobbi’s weight. Bobbi gets really angry and Bobbi walks over and raises her arm to slap her but Kelly stops her hand and pushes her to the ground. Amie are sitting outside in the playground on a bench talking about their Bobbi lays on the ground moaning in pain while rubbing her belly and Amie runs over to help her up but she can’t as she grunts in pain. Amie calls a teacher to call an ambulance as blood trickles form under Bobbi’s skirt.

Act 3:

Bobbi gets in an ambulance and is worried for her babies’ sake. She’s lying in the hospital bed when a doctor comes in and tells her that she has lost the baby. She starts to sob silently to herself as Amie enters the room, and after hearing the bad news she hugs her. Amie asks about the baby’s father, Bobbie stays silent but after thinking for a while she decides she can trust Amie. Bobbie explains the fact that she lives in a foster home, and she was raped by one of the carers.

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