The Big Cat Crashes Wedding
Russel Brand and Katy Perry’s jungle paradise wedding was an celebrity style wedding! The day was going well, until a wild tiger crashed the wedding. The tiger appeared out of nowhere to join the ceremony, but instead of a dream day, it was a nightmare trying to get it out of the wedding. “It was an amazing day, and the tiger made it even more special. It made the day even more one to remember than it already would have been. I don’t think anyone is ever going to forget their special day.” – Anonymous Source.
Lucy
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing. You have chosen to focus on one element of the story, which is a good idea in such a short article.
This is a MERIT
TO make it even better, you need to think about how some of your sentences might contradict each other. You mention that the tiger was a "nightmare" but then you say it added to the special day. How can you make this part of the story work better?
Mr Monahan